Alexander,
Great work.
I've just given it a quick scan and have the following comments:
o I think the file download links named [here] would be more
useful if they provided the full filename rather than just
the text "here". (Kind of tough because the filenames are
long, I know).
o I think the bootloader flash instructions need a couple of
more warnings, (ie. make sure it is on AC power, and DO NOT
RESET if the verifying...done message doesn't appear).
o I saw a couple of minor typos that I can fix in CVS
tomorrow.
Other documents that probably don't exist yet that could be useful to
link in could be:
o How to setup networking, (in all of its various
forms). Writing this documentation would primarily involve
pulling pieces together from wiki pages.
o A more complete ipkg primer, (which I should write soon).
-Carl
Alexander Guy writes:
> Greetings,
> I just put up a rough draft of some of the new v0.4 documentation.
> I'd like any feedback anyone has:
>
> http://familiar.handhelds.org/releases/v0.4/install/H3600/install.html
>
> Known Issues:
>
> * some of the links aren't totally working yet, I haven't put the files
> in place.
>
> * the document should point to the initial doc on how to load OSLoader in WinCE.
>
>
> Alexander
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Received on Sun May 13 20:29:05 2001
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